MY first PT fanfic :)

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Back when i joined this community i said that i was planning a doujinshi(does anybody remember that?XD)

I realized that i would never have the power to draw such a long story, so it became a fanfic. The story is already planned, but i'm not sure how often i will be updating this story. I was wondering if i should write this story at all, because i think it became quite cheesy and i have other ideas for better stories. But because i want to get better at writing and it already took my a long time to make this story work i decided to write it anyway.Thanks to my friend who Beta-read the story, although he had no idea what the story was about XD

So long story short here it is:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6277690/1/Herzen_im_Einklang

I'm still triyng to figure out how fanfiction.net works :S

I wanted to call the story resonating hearts(totally stealling that idea from Tales of Symphonia XD) but i thought i need a german title since the chapters names will be german. So instead i chose Herzen im Einklang which means Hearts in unison

Please review if you read it so i can get better at writing

....way to long post